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"Your paper was very informative and I learned a lot from it. I think you should have added a couple of images onto your paper to add some color." -Haley S. 5/21/12 12:46pm Thank you haley for critiqueing me.

"Your paper was very informational and was thorough and I saw how long it was so I know it must have days-on-end to do it. The only problem I noticed was that you didn't have five works cited and no in-text citations. But other than that it was great. Good job." -TimothyT 5/21/12 12:57pm

thank you for critiqueing.